Sword of the Elements

The grammer is horrid. I bought it and could only barely force myself through what I think is chapter 1. I didn't even begin the adventure.

Terrible, terrible writing

Again, I couldn't get into it like with the demo, the English is still very choppy and someone should have helped edit it more before releasing it. I'm sure it's a great game, I just can't really get into it. I won't refund, for support of the author, but I'd like to see changes made when the game is updated.

This game needs a good proofreading. This has a lot of potential but I could't get into the story because of the grammatical errors. Trying to read this became quite painful after a while. I'm going to keep the game in hopes of a good update in the future.

But the fact that the English is so bad it kinda ruins it...I hope you fix it because it could be a really good game

Awful. Not worth spending money on or reading.

Bad grammar, bad spelling, in the first 20 pages or so I think there were 3 meaningful actions?? The description is good and imaginative if overly long and in depth. Much better interactive novels available. Try the lost heir if not already

Bad language structure is far worse of a sin than bad spelling.

Terrible grammer. Hard to read.

Since the latest update, this game has become much better. Its still not perfect, but you can understand it at least.

If I'm going to pay for something want to be able to read it without having trying to decipher it. And I also I at suck grammar so if I notice it. It must be bad.

It is much better after the update

Game was unreadable up until now. Read a few pages, and a lot of work was done to fix this adventure. So glad to finally have it fixed

I hope this Uzbekistan teen knows English,which sadly he don't.But never mind,but please update this app and correct all the typos.Almost nothing is understandable,for the word arrangement is way too messy.And some brought the same meaning too.But the plot is great.At least that was if its not tainted with misspells.

Again, I couldn't get into it like with the demo, the English is still very choppy and someone should have helped edit it more before releasing it. I'm sure it's a great game, I just can't really get into it. I won't refund, for support of the author, but I'd like to see changes made when the game is updated.

The grammar is so horrible as to make the story unreadable. Waste of money until it is spellchecked and edited by a native English speaker.

The English is very bad and it makes it hard to get into the story

I hope this Uzbekistan teen knows English,which sadly he don't.But never mind,but please update this app and correct all the typos.Almost nothing is understandable,for the word arrangement is way too messy.And some brought the same meaning too.But the plot is great.At least that was if its not tainted with misspells.

Look I think the writer has a good story here. Just needs a native English speaker or anyone to fix all the grammar problems. There were several on the first page. I'm not even a grammar Nazi, its just hard to focus on the story because of the errors. Get that fixed and I'll give u a great review.

The grammar is not very good at all extremely confusing!

The grammar us so horrible as to make the story unreadable. Waste of money until it is spellchecked and edited by a native English speaker.

Development must not care about their consumer. Release a game, unplayable. Get an email, and even respond? Month later still no update. Worst game released from these guys, soley because it is unplayable.

This game needs a good proofreading. This has a lot of potential but I could't get into the story because of the grammatical errors. Trying to read this became quite painful after a while. I'm going to keep the game in hopes of a good update in the future.

Who ever made this probably just ran the text through google translate and called it a day

I played this on pc first and it is a good game it just needs to be proofread badly. I do hope the writer finishes the story as it is good the English is just a big putoff

I'm finding it hard to get in to it simply because the words are either mixed up or used wrong and I only just started.

But the fact that the English is so bad it kinda ruins it...I hope you fix it because it could be a really good game

made it almost unintelligible.

The English was written strangely but it added to the flavor and language of the words as if it really was from another world. I enjoyed it and they length was very satisfying.

Almost unintelligable. This should not be for sale at all. There has been no effort put into the translation whatsoever and I would like my money back.

English. The author clearly speaks English as a second language, and has neglected to have a native speaker or at least someone more proficient in the language proofread and edit his work. The entire work is filled with choppy, poorly phrased sentences; some so much so that you can't even tell what they are trying to say. It is headache to read and entirely destroys any immersion in the story. Until this is fixed, I would not recommend buying this game.

The grammer is just not good, makes it impossible to try and get into the game, really wish I could get a refund

Their is still alot of grammatical errors. Im going to keep the game though and hope they update it with all the errors fixed!

More Story less game of choices

Great.

Wasn't edited as well as it should've been. Became a headache trying to force myself into the story

I hope this Uzbekistan teen knows English,which sadly he don't.But never mind,but please update this app and correct all the typos.Almost nothing is understandable,for the word arrangement is way too messy.And some brought the same meaning too.But the plot is great.At least that was if its not tainted with misspells.

Again, I couldn't get into it like with the demo, the English is still very choppy and someone should have helped edit it more before releasing it. I'm sure it's a great game, I just can't really get into it. I won't refund, for support of the author, but I'd like to see changes made when the game is updated.