Attack of the Clockwork Army

Interesting story idea & it could be built into something great, but as is, it feels like an incomplete rough draft. The characters are very shallow, & I know it's fiction but the "Aboriginal Australian" characters in particular seem to be written with very little knowledge of what life was genuinely like at the time of colonisation (& now). It grates to see people given the idea that an 19th century Aboriginal woman would be free to sail to England of her own accord, or have a brother who owned a pub. Australia engaged in Black slavery well into the 20th century, Aboriginal people couldn't vote, let alone enter a public bar to buy a drink. Fictional stories claiming otherwise wouldn't be so bad if most Australians didn't still believe they were fact.

Original and well written.

To be honest this was a let down. I thought it would be more about a civil war instead of traveling with people who hate each other and one small battle and then its over. And not enough choices that mean anything or have an impact.

Dont say that its free when you download the game then get instanly asked to pay 4.99 plus I wouldnt pay a dime for this game the only good game you have ever made was and only ever will be the great tournament but even then it was mediocore but it was your only game that was truly "free"

Didn't read once I knew you had to pay. Please put this info in the description

Played it, loved it

I wish I could say this was good but it wasn't. The choices you make have little impact on the story, well, they have no impact on the story actually. You're basically a forced spector on this journey.

I couldn't understand the story and none of the endings even make sense - the story itself is full of holes, not worth the money

I found it boring. Your choices have little affect and I care little for the story.

I only get the first two chapters?! Wtf?! Thats a rip off for a game such as this one!!

It was a good read, though, the fact that aluminium was spelt without the I although it is set in Australia and England was slightly annoying.

I wish I could say this was good but it wasn't. The choices you make have little impact one the story, well, they have no impact on the story actually. You're basically a forced spector on this journey.

If you hate it, give a constructive criticism so the author can improve it :) the game is good it has it's flaw but your reviews can help improve that.

Worst one I've ever played. Incredibly short and none of your choices have any real impact on what happens.

I always love this company's games

A lot of the choices I make didn't matter.

I want more. It's too short. Could you make it longer?

Thank you for this game :)

I up'd the rating :)

Original and well written.

Not bad

Too short

This was just so bland I didn't even bother buying the full story after Chapter 2. None of the choices I made had any impact on the progression of the story.

I've certainly played worse. And really there's nothing wrong with this game... It just feels flat. Like something is missing.

Lot of the choices made no difference, found it more than a little disappointing.

Cool universe and concept, but choices don't really matter and it's REALLY short. Wouldn't recommend it.

I've played the demo and I think I'm gonna buy it yeah you could make it a little less super filled with words. I mean I like it detailed but too detailed and I skim through cause I'd rather play it then read I am a big fan of books though don't get me wrong. Anyways I'm gonna buy the game and hope its not bad.

It's a cool concept and the story's okay but its just not worth the money.

The whole concept is good but the story feels way too short and the choices....they are almost non-existent.

I only get the first two chapters?! Wtf?! Thats a rip off for a game such as this one!!

It was a good read, though, the fact that aluminium was spelt without the I although it is set in Australia and England was slightly annoying.

Played it, loved it