Reaching Out for Android
It is really good actually it teaches you a lesson about not to be a bully and how not to be bullied by others. It also is pretty sweet, the problem is its too short I would love to know what will happen to the story after the ending. Anyways Keep up the Good Work
If only itd stop freezing in place id give it full rating. Although the music that decides to continue isnt half bad. Better than elevator music at least. If there was any elevator any more to play music that is.
The text for the story constantly pauses up making it impossible to continue the story. I want to read this but its not working correctly. I have to start the story then read till it pauses up then close the app open it again and see if I can hopefully get farther.
It is a fun VN, has a short unfinished story, the entire game feels like a prologue. The drawings are well done and people dont have that so called 'potato face'. I would gladly support the author if he chooses to finish the plots.
A well-written kinetic novel; however, it only takes 5-10 minutes to read and that's just way too short. The characters were just beginning to become fleshed out and show character development and then the story ended, which sucks. I didn't like how Jack sort of dissuades Rudy from getting involved with Cecile in the beginning, so he's just as guilty as Rudy for being a passive bystander. But when Rudy has to confront his own issue of being a bully, Jack acts like he's "holier-than-thou" and criticizes Rudy pretty harshly, which is what Rudy needs for his wake-up call, but, um, what about Jack??? It's true, being a bystander isn't as bad as being a bully, but most of the time, it's hardly any better. I don't see what gives Jack the grounds to talk about stopping bullying, since he hasn't done anything to actually stop it himself.
It is a short (30 - 40 mins) VN, but very well written, music is nice and art is well drawn and used. I strongly recommend to download and read this.
The story is just awesome, but there's a few typos in the dialogues. Please make the sequel please I'm beging you ;_;
The plot is nothing from another world, and for me it felt a bit cheesy, but I can say the characters didn't felt superficial and it was overall enjoyable for how short it was. Would read another novel from this author, if he promises more surprises this time
But not the worst either. This counts as a Kinetic Novel since readers are not given any choices to make. Should you develop another program some choices and a longer story. You have the talent, utilise it
It is really good actually it teaches you a lesson about not to be a bully and how not to be bullied by others. It also is pretty sweet, the problem is its too short I would love to know what will happen to the story after the ending. Anyways Keep up the Good Work
Reading this novel is excellent I loved but one bug was freezing but it didn't stop me kept reading I finished it already and how it was acted was adorable mostly cheesy but I really like it hope you the author make more novel.
I think I finished it in 10 minutes...it was so short and ended wrong because I wanted to know what happened next. Please make it longer I love this story... Its so cute!~ <3
It really speaks out to bullies and to people who dk they are bullying. But, I am rather unhappy with the story ending so quickly.
If only itd stop freezing in place id give it full rating. Although the music that decides to continue isnt half bad. Better than elevator music at least. If there was any elevator any more to play music that is.
In total a bit disappointed, ended when it should have really started. But very good story with a very important message. Well worth it!
The text for the story constantly pauses up making it impossible to continue the story. I want to read this but its not working correctly. I have to start the story then read till it pauses up then close the app open it again and see if I can hopefully get farther.
This was a very sweet little story. Very straight to the point and the music was good-it didn't take away from the overall story. 5/5!
This VN is a "must read" for people who likes to read visual novels. The story is very good, the music is nice and right for the scene and the art is simply amazing. I hope to see more of their work. :D
Even though I came here trying to find a Japanese related Visual Novel, I decided why not give this one a try and oh man I do not regret it. I loved every bit of it but the part where Rody denies being a bully and lectured Cecile off kinda pissed me off but hey thats the main point of this VN. Damn the romance in this also played a massive part in this and the fact that Jack actually told Rody he was a jerk/bully even though they're friends really made me happy. DO CONTINUE MAKING VISUAL NOVELS
The story could have had more drama and twists in it. But the artworks great!!Maybe you could have made this into a game?
I've seen worse, but I was hoping that the years worth of effort would've amounted to something with a little more content. If you ever decide on adding more story material, I'll keep my eye out.
It had good art a story, however, it was really short. Took me about five minutes to finish. Would be nice if the author made it longer
A normal story with a normal ending. If only you put a romance in the ending, that would get a big impact if this novel.
Just couldn't get in to the story when it crashes so often.
I downloaded this in impulse (based in good reviews) and loved the general plot! The effects are a bit lacking; add music....and reader interaction please! Although I do like how it was based on stopping bullying!! Their should be more novels like this ~
The characters are really likable and easy to relate to. At least two out of four people have been in Rody's position, and sadly much more in Cecile's. My only problem is that it's too short. Maybe a sequel?
A delightful and short little novel that I liked. The graphics are amazing and the sound and short plot....it really was something to take to heart. Really I wish this was longer yet I see the problem on how to work your way through it after this....still, a pretty sweet VN that everyone should read. I salute whoever made this. ~^-^~
But it keeps crashing to home screen after roughly 1 minute. I made it to 3 by saving and quick advancing bits I'd already read. LG G3, Android 5.0.
It was pretty cool. The story seemed good. I was only a minute in when suddenly the text turned white and the app crashed. I was sent back to my home screen. I opened it again and I got past the point of crashing until... Once again, it crashed. The screen went black and then suddenly I was back at my home screen again. *sigh* I'm uninstalling until this bug can be fixed. I really would have loved to play it.
Finished in about 20 minutes. But even in that short time found myself interested in the characters and felt a connection with them. Would love to see more of Cecile and Rody's relationship. Perhaps a sequel? Possibly full length as well?
Beautiful and heartwarming story about the very serious problem of bullying though , there are some programming errors in which the game freezes then you have redo to all of which you have not saved but overall it's a very good visual novel.
I loved this little novel. I now have the courage to stand up for myself when I get bullied. Thank you so much :')
It really speaks out to bullies and to people who dk they are bullying. But, I am rather unhappy with the story ending so quickly.
The story is simple and yet realistic. It would have been nice if it's longer. XD Anyway, hope you make more VN in the future~~~^_^
When other users say it's really short I thought "oh... may be 20 minutes long" when I play it... it actually finished in 3 minutes... but the story is really good.
The story is good, it has some gramatical errors but the 4 stars are because it randomly freezes and i have to go to my home screen and go to it again :P
In total a bit disappointed, ended when it should have really started. But very good story with a very important message. Well worth it!
This has the potential to be some of the best stuff I've ever read but you made something that could be awesome into some piece of crap
I loved this little novel. I now have the courage to stand up for myself when I get bullied. Thank you so much :')
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Good execution and delivery. If only it was longer. Just as the characters were already being developed, the game ends. It was very disappointing to a good start. Great potential, but enjoyed it nonetheless. I'll give it a higher rating if you make a part 2