Last Day in Life

It's my first time to play a VN. I thought the story was too short and ended bad. Maybe next time you could do it better (esp. story and graphics). Keep up the work!

Hm it's sad to lost a family member, but since they lived their life to the fullest, instead of sad and grief he welcomed it without so much regret. Well a short VN has its own forte. You won't get bored. Ah dual language yes? Good job but English version needs more work.

I get that warm feeling u said to have when writing the story. It just doesnt get to readers due to the lack of expression in the narration. U will definitely do better in expressing it next time. ^_^

The game ok

Needs improvement the english translation is actually pretty bad and it is so short...You can actually like put a short background or flashback of them.... It started with someone dying already...I think it ruined the dramatic part.... But I see potential in your work. Don't give up and make more!!

It's my first time to play a VN. I thought the story was too short and ended bad. Maybe next time you could do it better (esp. story and graphics). Keep up the work!

The art is average (but I can see the artist becoming really good in the future with hard work), you are in dire need of a spellchecker, there needs to be more photos, and the story the me the feeling you don't know what it's like to have a family member die. Maybe you have, but the story just feels...fake. His past is well-made, however.

I get that warm feeling u said to have when writing the story. It just doesnt get to readers due to the lack of expression in the narration. U will definitely do better in expressing it next time. ^_^

I would give it 5 stars for the idea but the English translation bothered me so much during the game so, sorry not sorry. It has potential. I'm no grammar expert but it's just really disturbing reading it. What a waste. Would love to make it a better story if you ever need.

There's a lot of grammatical and spelling errors in the English version of this novel...but it's alright....and it's really short.

That was really sad but in a good way that just told me how life is really something worth having and loving im no gonna start saying poetik words but this was great ! Thanks for all your awesome work and keep it up !

Needs improvement the english translation is actually pretty bad and it is so short...You can actually like put a short background or flashback of them.... It started with someone dying already...I think it ruined the dramatic part.... But I see potential in your work. Don't give up and make more!!

I'm staring to like your work, this novel was short but sweet, sad but a happy kind of sad, I can't wait until your next story

The art is okay but could be improved. I'm sure you can do a better job than this. It looks hand drawn. An original story that would be better if it just narrates automatically. Not a bad topic. Can be better.

The story is too short and graphics are average. The story line is not bad, but its kind of too short but I expect your next vn will gona great

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The message for younger generation is touching. I thank the developers for this small, meaningful inspiration.

It was beautiful. Keep working you are amazing. :)

Sad but meaningful

Ceritanya terlalu pendek, grafiknya lumayan sih, ga ada event pemilihan pertanyaan rasanya hambar jadi ga keliatan ada true endingnya, udah ketahuan alur ceritanya bakalan gimana maaf bila saya kritiknya terlalu berlebihan :v, saya suka dengan alur ceritanya, musiknya juga pas, tolong buat yang lebih baik lagi dari ini supaya ciptaan bangsa mendunia

This is my first time to read a VN so not much i know.. The graphic still bad.. And sometimes when Ben going to the other way it took 3-5 second maybe.. Well i knew what he doing but i don't know why it's feel weird.. The story not too long but i'm impressive you can make a story like that.. Need some improvement i know but i think this good enough.. Good luck for making some VN.. I hope you can more better at this..