Memo - Visual Novel

Adorable and lovely for its brief length; I grew attached to the characters and enjoyed the story considerably. However, there is one very large drawback: The VN appears almost completely unchanged from the PC version.The controls are tiny and ill suited for a smaller screen, difficult to press at times. During scenes with full-page text, the bottom lines are sometimes cut off.

In my opinion, it needs more improvement. Such as the text and the characters. Cut off texts from side to bottom. The protagonist is too dull when it comes to response and the story as well. The music buffers from time to time and some aren't looped nicely. Hope to see updates from this!

Nicely done visual novel! It really feels like a short version of Love Hina. There isn't much choices available as most of the dialogue is all set, but the few choices you make affect the outcome, which has 6 different endings. As many have said, the text can go beyond the bottom and gets lost but this is a very well made story!

I was bored and I'm into visual novels and I don't pc/laptop so I thought I find some great visual novels and found this great visual novel which don't take large space. However I don't see all text on kind full page text screen (Idk what's that called). Also what engine was made on? If renpy than I kinda understand. Btw mine phone is samsung galaxy j1 if you don't phones.

I beat the game with less than an hour for the endings 3/6, 5/6, and 6/6 (endings 5/6 and 6/6 does stay the same as a bad end *spoiler alert*) but nonetheless it is a very great game and I am hoping to know if this one will have a sequel to it

To be honest it lacks. Throughout the game I feel like I am in a knowledge hole and don't know what's going on. It doesn't really properly explain much. Kosouke for example, also it is kinda brief and thus doesn't allow you to fully emerse yourself in the game

Great game. I had 2 good ending and 1 bad ending when i played this game simulationly. Overall great games and you might wabt to change the game where the protagonis can make a lot choices and the effect had a lot leading toward the various ending. Well good games guys loved it.

I did all endings including the true ending (if that is what it was?) 4 stars.. why? Your story is good ill say. But when a long message comes ,it cuts off.do better next time ok?

The visuals are well done and not overwhelming, the visuals have a beautiful and calming feel about them. The story is a little cliché, however it's great none the less. There is not alot of backstory on each of the characters however you do feel part of the story right of the bat. Thanks to some good writing and visuals. The only downside being it's just too short.

The story is cliché and not too interactive. But i like the visual.

Story ended very abruptly and seemed very unfinished in the storyline. A real shame as it was getting interesting. Just seems pointless to me putting out an unfinished story.

I really love that you can go back and figure that liz is lizard from when the main guy was a kid oh sorry if I ruined it for you sorryyyy!!

Its really enjoyable but the story is so short I want to see a happy ending with Liz like they get along at last and hanging out together and marry each other

Ok I get that it is long but seriously halfway through the story it just stops plz make a part 2 at least

A well written story, albeit shorter than I would have liked. Looking forward to more great stories from you guys!

This is the best thing.i really love this.it didnt have an ending but i already knew what was the end.i wont spoil it if you font know

Wow. This was amazing. It's short, but it's a VERY rich story, with small details that become important. It never feels like the pace is bad, it's consistent as hell. It's just amazing, it's got me into visual novels as a whole. I recommend this to pretty much anyone.

I loved it , I'm not to judge mental on things because hey technical things are to shaddy but hey you got yourself a fan so if u need advice shout out I'll gladly help if I can :b ..I just wish there's an option to hit that one dude lol, but the story kinda makes the problem with the clicking thing worth it ... Well to me it us well cya in the next I guess

I got 6/6 nd i thought it wasnt good ending so i played another time nd it give me 3/6 what does it mean i dont know i have ended game as it is made or not iam still dissapointed...

Great novel. Disappointed that it was so short however.

Liz's character is not likable. Writing disappears off bottom of screen.

Lovely but there're some technical issue... may I ask for the sequels? ^^

I didnt like how the game just ended after the music box breaks I wanna see what happens after that

I wish that kind of story happen in real life I like it very much

It's a good game I really enjoy it but I didn't get the ending 3 then I discover after watching YouTube that there is a missing decision , fix it plz

It should have a part 2 version where the story will end and what will happen next

And also can you make a visual novel about a black haired girl and a cat

I was left feeling sad when the game was over are u going to make a update soon

It didn't end well he lost his friends

I LOVE THIS VISUAL NOVEL MAKE MORE OF THIS STUFF AND UPDATE IT I LOVE THIS I ALREADY FINISHED THIS PLEASE MAKE MORE I WOULD RATE LIKE A 1,000,000 STARS PLEASE THE BEST VISUAL NOVEL THE #1 NOVEL I PLAYED!!!

this is my first visual novel... i end up playing this twice to get a real ending.

It ends with him walking. Really? Too short.

I wish their was more ending. I feel as if my guy got no one to love at the end of the day.

Come on really I was just getting into it

I am so lucky I was born in this universe !

It ends in the middle way too bad

I just downloaded it and finished it right about 25 minutes after downloading it. Hoping to get a sequel or next chapter though

It's good and I hope you make more of these novels. It makes me feel like I'm in the novel myself

I wish it was longer it makes me mad.

I love this game and really wish you would make a 2ND one to add onto the story because the game was kinda short.