Zombie Chronicles 2

Not once was the word quiet spelled correctly. The word meet was spelled meat. The concept is good but it needs some heavy editing. It feels like it was written in another language and then translated to english by someone who isn't a native english speaker. Also there isn't too much zombie fighting, and making the wrong choice could cause you to have to start over which isn't really fun. The story wasn't bad and I really liked that it feels like a game with the tasks and different areas.

Good concept, I'm a big fan of zombies so I liked this straight away. The only thing that is annoying is the spelling and grammar. It feels rushed and that it hasn't had a proof read at all. Fix the pretty often spelling and grammar mistakes, add some illustrations and you got yourself a winner.

Im not a fan of zombies but i do LOVE this story XD The characters back and forth jokes are very natural feeling and i love the all the characters but most of all Johnny because come on katanas will always be epically cool lol. I hope you get a chance to write the third arc, no matter how long it takes.

Great game with its little flaws, bad grammar being the main one. Would be great for the story to have a bit more choice and longer chapters and story altogether ???? get the next ones out already

Everytime my phone goes to slepp mode it say that zombie chronicles stop working and a bunch of words is spelled wrong

The game is great, so is the story line, but some parts are rushed. I would rate 5 stars, but i put 4 cuz of the poor grammar in many parts. Great job otherwise.

Really got into this story! Yeah spelling is all over the place but the story more than makes up for it. Hurry up and get the next book out!!

HI IF YOU'RE THE MAKER OF THIS GAME please continue! I love ♥♥ these types of apocalypse games and very well written btw, with a few spelling errors but those errors don't matter.

Im not a fan of zombies but i do LOVE this story XD The characters back and forth jokes are very natural feeling and i love the all the characters but most of all Johnny because come on katanas will always be epically cool lol. I hope you get a chance to write the third arc, no matter how long it takes.

I mean no offense when I say, the grammar is atrocious. The story seems too short in ways & lacks in certain detail as well. Please take this as constructive critisism. Other than that, thus far, are my only opinions. I honestly feel you have a strong foundation to start building off of with this. Yet as I said, proof read and spell check is a must & more detail. Draw the readers in to where it's like you are painting a vivid image in our minds. Because, since I am being honest, I got bored a few times.

Good concept, I'm a big fan of zombies so I liked this straight away. The only thing that is annoying is the spelling and grammar. It feels rushed and that it hasn't had a proof read at all. Fix the pretty often spelling and grammar mistakes, add some illustrations and you got yourself a winner.

I love things about the walking dead/zombie apacylapse, it`s a good story but youre laking speach. As in you always say 'Said' (example: Cole said laughing you couldve said cole laughed) also you put will instead of well, at least i think you meant to say well. Cause you said 'Will, Kastsou will do'. Said cole' Also add pictures, itll make it funner and interesting for the reads. Fix up your grammar and mistakes and of course id give 5

Not once was the word quiet spelled correctly. The word meet was spelled meat. The concept is good but it needs some heavy editing. It feels like it was written in another language and then translated to english by someone who isn't a native english speaker. Also there isn't too much zombie fighting, and making the wrong choice could cause you to have to start over which isn't really fun. The story wasn't bad and I really liked that it feels like a game with the tasks and different areas.

It has some grammar problems. I would also like if you added more choice making like in the first one. But other then that great game can't wait for the next one.

The grammar and spelling in this story is complete rubbish. There is little to no originality to the story either. You're in a camp and you go on raids. I'd recommend 'Choice of Games.'

Okay, my problem is that whenever I press a button, it crashes. Please fix this seems like a fun game

The story is too good! You cant just end it like that! We need a season 3! Anyways goodjob on the style of the game and plot. Hoping the nxt one will come out soon.

Everytime my phone goes to slepp mode it say that zombie chronicles stop working and a bunch of words is spelled wrong

You need to fix the grammar and add a few pictures so you can have an idea of what's going on if you do both of these things I will rate 5 stars. Please make a third or add more story to this one I will not delete it if you make more

Can't wait for the next one. But try to slow down and get the spelling right in the process

HI IF YOU'RE THE MAKER OF THIS GAME please continue! I love ♥♥ these types of apocalypse games and very well written btw, with a few spelling errors but those errors don't matter.

I love it! But I'm annoyed as to how there are no female or child soldiers!! There are times in life where I wish male military did not exist!

Seriously well thought stories. But unfortunately in the camp 2 ,the stories gets kind of short but still brilliantly written. Although there is some grammatical error but hey, as long as the stories runs smoothly,im cool with it. When is the next book going to arrive??

Yes there are a few errors. But the story line is great. ZC2 has replaced zombie exodus as my favorite text based game.

don't listen to the haters they suck make a lot of booooooooks plez

Good story but I couldn't continue as the spelling and grammar ruined it.

You need to fix the grammar and add a few pictures so you can have an idea of what's going on if you do both of these things I will rate 5 stars. Please make a third or add more story to this one I will not delete it if you make more

AMAZING OH MY GOSH Please make the next one please that is amazing oh my gosh if I could I would rate it 1 million stars or more that is a really good adventure book basically

Great story. Everything felt natural. I would have no issue giving it more stars. I would like more proff reading though. A few mistakes are never that bad but it did seem it it was a little rushed. Greatness that's time. I don't mind waiting so if you guys do make a third one which I hope you do please take time to make sure the text is straight before you release. Thank you again for this read I hope you guys keep it going.

Had fun reading the story I got really into it only thing if there can be some picture that would just make it better and a small Grammer cheack other then that the story is great can't wait for the next one

Please!!!! Make the arc 3, ZC3.The story is amazing! And now i think i know where the name Hok came from in the story. Anyway we'll be waiting for the third one

But you can tell this guy's first language isn't English. "Make haste" is how you say it in other languages.

There are lots of misspelled words like when it was suppose to say well it said will and many other misspellings and grammar misapps but besides that love the game keep up the good work

Love this game.. A few spelling errors but didn't bother me. You have to bring out the 3rd part.

Amazing story with some spelling errors. Other than the errors it ended with the best cliff hanger ever.

Great story lot of spelling, and punctuation errors..but great story please bring next one!

I love it! But I'm annoyed as to how there are no female or child soldiers!! There are times in life where I wish male military did not exist!

I can't wait for the next one. Please make another!! Please Please PLEASE!

I loved the story it just grabs hold of you from beginning to the end of it. The characters felt real and each one was amazing in his or her own way with interesting back grounds stories i really do hope you make part three to this and maybe giving us a choice to be a female or male, so we can feel more like we are the protagonist in the story and maybe learn what lead you to be comatose in the white hotel like Johan.

I like all things post apocalyptic. I wish there was a facebook page, or group. If there is, you should change the picture to one of the icons for your app.