ERASER : Visual novel for Android
Hoping the story will pick up and hoping that it will keep getting better. Great story, although a bit confusing at times. I'm sure that this novel will be great when completed! Great job!
When will the full version come out? Not trying to be impatient or anything cause it musta took some hard work... by the way keep up the good work????????????
I don't think this will be finished anytime soon... Or ever, since there hasn't been an update for a long time.. It was good, with as far as you can make it, anyway. It seems like a great story. I wish to see the full version one day.. -Maria
Soo~when will you guys ever had to update the episodes i mean how long.I didn't mean like it was terrible and all,i'm just saying the novel was good for visualing our minds y'know.The global itself are looking foward for the full version.Including me.
First off that disrespect isn't call for like I said could of confirm if your going to continue this game "demo" or not...if people interested in it just let us know if you will complete it or not now can you read this?
I haven't played all of it only a little but I already like it. My only problem is it takes a few taps to get the sentences to actually show up and so it's to slow. That is my only problem at the moment.
I rated the game 1 star because the game crashed every time it loads so i haven't had a chance to play it yet. Fix your game
I don't understand, did i get a 'bad ending' sort of thing like that? Stuck on 1st day and that's it? What am i supposed to do?
I really love the story but some things didn't show in the log and a few grammar corrections are needed but other than that its grate
Its really REALLY good put pretty short i was suprised at the ending :( maybe part 2 ? Ore just continue on this one ? I would rate it 5stars if only it would be just a little bit longer ! But its really good and amaizing !
I don't think this will be finished anytime soon... Or ever, since there hasn't been an update for a long time.. It was good, with as far as you can make it, anyway. It seems like a great story. I wish to see the full version one day.. -Maria
I kept repeating the beginning over and over and thought I broke it but good visual novel
You really do need a proofreader, under the cover of poor grammar and writing I really do think there is a sound structure to this novel, too bad I can't access it
The app will not open. It does not force close, it just will not open. Every time I open it up, it just force closes. it will not allow me to send any information.
Has the full version been released yet? I left the game for like 6 months, the full version should be out right?
I love it from what I've read so far you guy's have done a wonderful job on it and do you know when it you might finish it thanks i in joy reading both story's they were great
I can only go up to the scene where he leaves Vio's house with the class notes. It seemed interesting though. Iam using a RCA tablet.
When will the full version come out? Not trying to be impatient or anything cause it musta took some hard work... by the way keep up the good work
The story is really intriguing , can't wait for the full version! I'm not trying to rush you, but where can I know any news or updates on the game?
The story is amazing and mysterious. The two of them(Vio & Tito) are very good characters. I like them both. The story is perfect the way it is. I love the background music. But, this story is just a demo, right? I can't wait to see the full version. I really appreciate you to create such story for us. Please let me know when will you finish the story and update the full version? I have been waiting for it since forever. Or at least tell me when do you think you'll be able to complete it. Thank-you so much!
I don't understand, did i get a 'bad ending' sort of thing like that? Stuck on 1st day and that's it? What am i supposed to do?
I'm waiting for it :) nice story
Could of put a to be continue and it did got very interesting...
So i read really fast, and even if the text speed is on max it still takes too long to load the next sentence, other than that its nice
When I first played this, I didn't know it was in version 0.2. So when it stopped at that cliffhanger, I literally attacked my screen to see if I missed anything. I replayed the whole thing. Word for word. Really interesting concept.
Yo its me again I can't wait for the finished product I was just wonder how far you've gotten that's all if you respond that would be cool
Are you planning on putting a fee to download the full game when it's ready? I loved the game. Great work.
Please let the full version of this for free..:"( Interesting story line, I like it!(bec. It's unique:) I've never read an VN like this before) I'm really looking forward to the other parts of the story. Thanks for sharing this btw.^_^
I've really been looking for good visual novels and even though this is only a demo,I have to say that it's really good and would like to read the entire thing if I can find it. You just need to fix some of the grammar and make it better with Ren'Py engine.I also heard that you need someone to proofread and I would be interested in doing so before you release the final version
The prologue was phenomenal and really caught my attention; it showed me the potential that the visual novel has. But the poor grammar is really distracting and takes away from many aspects of the story. This VN has potential, but is currently suffering in the emotional field. I look forward to the continuation of ERASER.
The story itself is not really fresh or new but in itself its not bad this game didn't escape the cliche of some things but I still think it can be a pretty good one, so good luck on the project! By the way would be interested in being the proof reader for this game if you are interested I sent you guys an email :)
Only at the beginning still but so far it's really interesting. As others have said there are some grammar issues but that's easily fixed. It's also a little annoying that I have to tap twice to move onto the next text but, I don't know, that could just be a glitch on my end. Overall good game!
Liking it so far but when will we have the full version Edit: the wait begins. Ps. I like that you made it in English most good VN here are in Japanese or Korean so thank you
Only have one issue the text is so small i can hardly read it i dunno if its just my phone or what if possible please fix this thanks awesome game :3
but looking at the comments, it seems to be really worth reading. I also like the fact that the creator replies to comments about the game. Pretty awesome for the creator :)
The story is fair, not amazing or anything off the chart but it's fairly intersting. It gives off a lot of mystery about the characters that's partially filled up but then the story cuts off short and suddenly. For a moment I thought the game crashed or there was a bug. There are a lot of grammar issues in the english version, and I've also recognized the areas in the VN from Note Fragments. If you need help proofing I can help.
Send me the completed story when its done please.
I was totally drawn by the story when its suddenly back to menu..=_=…i thought that i press the wrong button so i try its again & again……some advise..add a caption "to be continued"...overall its a really nice game..can't wait for the full version^_^
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Amazing graphics. Totally mesmerizing. But needs work on characters facial expression. They look angry... also the music is cool. Hope the final version will be better in grammar and characters. Cheers ;)