Dark Moon Visual Novel

It needs a longer story I finished it in a night I will give it a five than

I really wanna know what happens after the ending

Its sooooo messed up on sooooo many levels... BUT I LOVE IT! AND I DON'T CARE IF THE ENGLISH IS MESSY OR IT JUMPS AROUND LIKE A BAT OUTTA- oh sorry. I forgot about the caps lock. I'm to lazy to fix it... Anyways I think this could be better but I like the way it is different than most visual novels..! Soooooo... bye! Oh... yeah... major cliff hanger by the way!

Please continue even though there is some grammar errors or weird stuffs going on and sometimes it gets confusing but please make more it's funny af.

Loved it

I liked it but seriously why end it like that

Makes no sence realy n its boring

Please Make It Long Stories Please!!

Though it has absolutely no plot and is filled with exaggerated clichés, it was absolutely hilarious and worth my time.

I'm a little confuse about all of this game but never laught so hard at this game anyway a good game.

It's very interesting and weird.I like this story but I think the ending was to bad.I like that girl "I think her name was cloudia" that was the killer.Make the next episode,please.

So... Finished(?) Really?? What kind of ending was that?? Where is that damn menu??? Idk if this true or not but is it true that whichever action we take the outcome is the same??? Where are the rest of the Dragonball(or it just me that missed like half of em)?? What bout that day when everything is skipped over??? Is there really another ending???? And why the fuq its named 'dark moon'??

I deleted it and redownloaded it to find different hidden things (if any) overall great game and I was looking for a mobile game like this Thanks oh and will there be an update or a 2 game (can't wait for it)

It's an interesting concept and all that. My favorite thing is what I recognize the app image to be. Seriously though, there are a LOT of grammatical errors, and ads every other two of the screen

This is a very weird but entertaining game full of dragon balls and extremely funny 4rth wall breaks and this game has very weird scenes... I love it because it reminds me with Dr. Who mixed with everything anime.

I liked how the story was all over the place and especially the 4th wall breaks. It is an interesting concept and I enjoyed much of the game. But seriously, where's that menu?!

I deleted it and redownloaded it to find different hidden things (if any) overall great game and I was looking for a mobile game like this Thanks oh and will there be an update or a 2 game (can't wait for it)

Even though the game has no actual plot or character development, it's funny. I like it

So... Finished(?) Really?? What kind of ending was that?? Where is that damn menu??? Idk if this true or not but is it true that whichever action we take the outcome is the same??? Where are the rest of the Dragonball(or it just me that missed like half of em)?? What bout that day when everything is skipped over??? Is there really another ending???? And why the fuq its named 'dark moon'??

I can't understand anything because the English is so bad and the story makes no sense.

I couldn't even get farther than that girl Zoe or whatever her name is wanting to show me the different things I should do.

Though it has absolutely no plot and is filled with exaggerated clichés, it was absolutely hilarious and worth my time.

Not a bad story, pretty funny some of it. Would like to see more like story app's like it

I have reached only one ending but is there any other endings.

Please Make It Long Stories Please!!

The game depwnds on your choices

Interesting And hilarious

This is amazing

I loved this story despite the brutal errors in grammer . I LAUGHED MY HEAD OFF!! Amazingly dark and intelligent humour! As I played/read Dark Moon I continously barked loudly..Laughing! It is absoulutly fabulous!! I HATE when people f*#k off with my front door too!Looking forward to your next endeavour! Two Green Shreks Up!!

This VN looks like a perverted murderer 12 year old put it together, but I love crap like this. I like the random humor and as another review had said (negatively) that this is like Harry Potter/Creepypasta. I'm in those fandoms so,yeah. Great job on this,but please continue.

I apologize, but this has terrible English and honestly it lacks plot as well. The narrator butts in every five seconds and the characters have no background. Also, this is basically an extremely ghetto Harry Potter/Creepypasta story.

I DIDN'T FIND ALL OF THE DRAGON BALLS.Plus I couldn't finish it because it said "TO BE CONTINUED..."So finish it

Please continue even though there is some grammar errors or weird stuffs going on and sometimes it gets confusing but please make more it's funny af.

thanks for such a novel but please countiue the good work I'm waiting till it's finished

What engine was this game made with? This game is a masterpiece! It's the funniest random game I've ever found on Google play!

Why is there a be continued!?

I will leave a better rating when it is finished.

Is there an episode 2 if there is can't wait to download it

FINISH GAME ALREADY.

Is that it I was playing the game then it said to be continued so is that it ?? I want to know the game said to be continued but I want to know what happens next I don't mind the bad translations please let me know