Era Of Destruction for Android
The story is scary and filled with suspense. The art is good. The characters are amazing. I like how you added emotions to them. Kindly revise the grammar structures of some sentences. Overall, your VN is good. I am looking forward for the next chapter. Kudos to the creators. :-)
Doesn't seem to have a proper ending
The grammar is terrible and the choices doesn't actually affect the story so it's kind of disappointing, but it's okay since it's not the final version of the visual novel.
The grammar in this game is terrible. Other than that, it was okay. I guess
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Grammar isn't perfect, but I don't have a particular problem with that. The story itself is an excellent concept, and I had fun reading it. It ended to abruptly for my tastes, though, and it seems to be more of an intro than anything else. It should also be noted that the choices ultimately make no difference.